sponsorship sequence for my product "Spray, Glide 'n' Glimmer"

My sponsorship sequence will be the first of what would be a two or three advert sponsorship sequence. Being the first of the seqeunce, it wil have to open with the cleaning dilemma.

So the camera will pan down this amazingly dirty surface with a voice over saying," These surfaces need a good clean". At the end of the dialogue the camera pan will stop with the product being at the end of the surface.

So in short:

Camera will pan across the dirty surface in a similar fashion to the 30 second TV advertisement.
As the camera pans a voice will say," These surfaces need a good clean."
At this point the camera will stop panning with  the product at the end of the surface.
So the camera will continuously pan until the product almost glides into shot.
The voice over will then say "Spray Glide and Glimmer sponsors (sponsored tv show yet to be considered.).

This will be my sponsor ship sequence.